umaima

Wow, This is really nice! You have written it in such a descriptive and fine manner. BTW It's not whiny at all! If anything, it's very consuming and to the ...

Nice :)

Thanks rbt00

Thanks the review was really helpful :))

Thanks the review was really helpful :))

Aww thanks AMxo :)) I am really glad you do!

Thank You so much :) I will look into everything there is to.

Thanks :)) I will correct all my mistakes now :))

Thanks Caitlyn :)) Means a lot :)

Hmm, well I hope you get your internet back soon, it sucks not to have it (I can't live without it )

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I didn't even read any of your reviews for heavens sake look black, I am already pissed at you and trust me I dis not okay! It was last minute ...

Hey Umaima here to review You know this was an amazing pieces and I loved it sso much... Red sins Red crimes, Red blood, Red wine. Empty words, Empty doom, ...

Okay, hmm formatting is actually how your poem should be divided... poems should be in stanzas and not written together, your poem is one which is to be in 4 ...

:D Thanks