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Hey blue bird! Okay so I am going to be reviewing this submission now and hope it helps you! First I am going to put punctuation, grammar and formatting in ...

Hey :D, I am here t review your submission for ya ;) Now I will try to be helpful but no guarantees! First of all "To a certain someone. You ...

Hey there! Okay so today you have me reviewing you submission! Commentary: The plot was good! I enjoyed the piece and as a result even liked it! I felt that ...

To say this poem was good, would be an underestimation because oh goodness this is such an amazing poem! Hey there, Umaima here to review your poem! I loved, like ...

As the others who cam before me have already pinpointed the mistakes let me give you a review based on how I felt about your submission! :D Okay so now ...

Wow, one big chapter there! So today, I am here to try reviewing this piece, not really sure I would be helpful but I will nevertheless try once! Okay now ...

Hey Robert :D Umaima here t review you submission! The poem was a nice piece. The one you can include in the short and sweet peices. I personally thought it ...

So the most complicated person is here to give you a review OH-smart-one! (Don't take that as a compliment :P) So let's begin with the review! I am going to ...

Hey :D Okay I am ere for a quick review because of the lack of time my dear friend! Bu I will try to help as much as I can! ...

Hey :D, Guess who's here to review? The one and only! Yes yes, it's me :P Aren't you the happiest person in this world XD Anyways, jokes apart let's get ...

HEy :D, I am going to start saying "Dude, you are one amazing writer! Where were you hiding all this time?" Because wow I just felt this so amazing. Now ...

Willow *screams in a high pitch voice which makes you faint* lol This is fabulous! Now though I was supposed to start with a hey I couldn't help screaming that! ...

Hey :D So seeing as I am reviewing the 16th chapter of your novel I know I have missed a lot. Which to my disappointment can't be helped with, not ...

Hey there :D Umaima for a quick review! I loved your writing style, it was just amazing and how you described things and the way you ended the story, it ...

Wow, this was one big chapter! Hey, Umaima here to review your amazing and enormously big chapter which after reading I thought, "Hey is she/he a published writer or something?" ...