ultraviolet

Hi! I liked it. I was going to nitpick, but then I saw that KD already did. She covered all the things that I noticed, so all I have to ...

This looks really good! I was wondering how you were going to do the whole doll thing, but this works out pretty perfectly. My only thing is it was kind ...

This is beautiful! When you mentioned flyleaf I immediately went to youtube to look up the song, and this is just a perfect description. I really like flyleaf. I got ...

Wow! I totally love this! My only question is what exactly does a werewolf look like? Other than that I think this is really wonderful. Good going! :smt003 :elephant: LOVE ...

I love your writing, style wise. I love the name Aston--though if I were being honest, I'd have to say I'd never heard it before now. But that should make ...

I like how you compare the fiance of Katherine to Lucius. :smt005 Oh, and yes, Snape was in love with Lily, But I like how you made Katherine with red ...

I loved it! I've never much cared for Snow White (OK I hated it), but this made me want to keep reading. It was very entertaining. I like how at ...

Hi! I want to say that this is pretty good! :D My favorite part is the part I'm assuming is the chorus, since it's getting repeated. I'm crying, I'm dieing ...

I've got to say, I loved it! Much better than Snow White or Sleeping Beauty. Prince Charming ending up being a girl, all I can say is lol! (I know, ...

I loved it but it was so sad! It actually happened in your life? I can't imagine. Is your sister all right? For personal-ness I give this 10 stars out ...

I really liked it. I did not once get the slightest bit bored. It shows that something as simply as teasing can really scar a person, and that some teenagers ...

Hi! overall I loved it, but you didn't put any lines between the paragraphs--or even indent spaces at the start of one. I loved the writing, but that made it ...

I loved it. :D I would seriously appreciate it if you would PM me when the next chapter's done. Even on a site like this it's hard to find GOOD ...

This was SERIOUSLY FUNNY!!! Normally when I think something like this is funny, I laugh on the inside. But when I read this I almost couldn't because I am on ...

I LOVED IT! Though Spoink is right, ninjas and explosions and whatever else would have been wicked. But I like how you kept it positive until Rabbity died. If I ...