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This was very haunting for some reason and it got me to shiver. I loved every moment of it. Thank you for this delightful poetry~ Onto nitpicking: I have very ...

Thank you for a very cute story~ I loved every moment of it~ On to the nitpicking: "They judge me differently, the love that a child should get from their ...

Thank you for a story on abuse. There need to be more stories that tell the straight up facts about abuse, instead of glorifying it. On to nitpicking: When you ...

I love this short story in every single sense. I can't find very many components of this story that need to be changed or altered, as I love it just ...

I am very enchanted by this story. I love it so very much. I beg you! Please write more of this; make it into a novel, or at least a ...

I very much enjoyed this piece. By enjoy, I mean that it broke my heart. I like this piece very much. Thank you for bringing it here. On to the ...

I don't know what it is about this piece, but it's very unsettling and I can't bring myself to enjoy reading it per se. I don't know, it's probably just ...

I apologize for not reading this. I will come around to reading it some time soon, but before I do, it seems that you have a few revisions to make. ...

I was absolutely enchanted by this! You captured so perfectly the attitude of a busy man saddled with a child. The story couldn't have been better! It was lovely in ...

Thrilling! Stunning! I don't have words to describe how I feel about this! It's wonderful, right down to every single letter. I am absolutely in love with your writing style ...

I am left very confused by this story. I find it fun and energetic, yet I can't bring myself to love it due to the fact that the punctuation is ...

I really like this haiku. It's quick and straight to the point. However, I think that you could make it even more deep by making it a tanka. A tanka ...

The description in this story is very nice, but I'm very confused. It doesn't seem to have very much meaning. I can't seem to find any sort of meaning behind ...

I enjoyed this poem very much! I'm very pleased that someone is still keeping Dracula alive. The only bit of criticism that I have for this is that it's a ...

This is a beautiful and cute and funny story! I loved every word of it, down to the child-like, enthusiastic descriptions. Thank you so much for blessing YWS with a ...