twistedracer01

While i thank you for your review please keep in mind that this project is under constant rewrite and not finished but i will keep these issues in mind

While i thank you for your review please keep in mind that this project is under constant rewrite and not finished but i will keep these issues in mind

Im still working on this and I will proof read every now and then just please point out issues in the plot, narrative, and grammar thanks

Yea but I went a very bad way with it

To all who reviews this book i am done with it and will no longer be working on it

Thanks and ill sure make notes on this :)

All right and cool profile pic ( :D )

Hello and good job on spotlight So on to the review... When I read it I really couldnt find any grammer or spelling mistakes Tell me if im wrong but ...

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Hello this poem is very great in many ways plus its very realatible so on to the review Now I say this to every poem that dose this but here ...

Good job on the poem but it needs some work, for example its really short but thats minor Know it could be a style choice but every word dosnt need ...

Ok ... This is a short, buitifull piece and it over all really good. So the imagry was exelent and I did notice some fiquritve lanquage so good job No ...

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Oh ok any way good job

Good job and a very deep poem may i ask what inspired you to write something like this(not saying its bad just wondering)please PM me the awnser and I didnt ...

All right thanks for telling me : )