twistedracer01

So great job and congrats on spotlight So lets get started, The poem was short and filled with emotions but there is one issue that @InfiniteRectangles pointed out ... The ...

Hello this poem is very great in many ways plus its very realatible so on to the review Now I say this to every poem that dose this but here ...

Great job with the poem and spot light! so first off your poem is a little lacking in figureitive lanquage. It dosnt matter if you did that on pourpus but ...

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Great job with the poem and spot light! so first off your poem is a little lacking in figureitive lanquage. It dosnt matter if you did that on pourpus but ...

Hi writer kitty good book and it's reeaallyy lllooonnnggg XD. Sorry but really good job. so I only read a small portion (sorry) its just to long for me to ...

Hi and good job with the poem and spotlight. Any way this poem is intresting so first off, its a little hard for me to keep each other seperate, Try ...

Great job and its such a " sweet poem" : ) And great idea using a previouse charecter * Thumbs Up * You're such a weirdo Marigold, he said. She ...

Great Job agian. I like the comparison between things good job. One thing is it reapets abit but i dont read a lot of poetry so i dont know it ...

Nice poem and kinda true. With the term "I love you" as an over used term it seems almost empty any way I cant find any misspeling. And it kinda ...

Hello madwriter. First of all great chapter and sorta mysterious. Any way there wasnt really any bad things in this but a couple nitpicks are in here. "( )" is ...

Great chapter!! by the way just curious... was this based on your trip. Any way good book (CHAPTER) and not to many issues. Lets begin. She had a 4.0 and ...

So another reveiw :]. Well another poem quick and easy for reveiws nice. So in the 4th block the "But no." the but shouldnt be capidlized unless the "..." is ...

Great job (like all ways) and I like it. The reson is because i can relate. Im sorta a loner i mean look at my page. But anyway lets see ...

Great poem and you had a intresting way hitting into the subject of romance. The first two lines seem odd though ( i see were you were going with it) ...

Wow great job and im with you here as a fan of most fantisy areas. some times reality sucks and there isnt any fantisy like are dreams. enough with the ...