turtlethatroars

The symbol of the ink is suppose to represent writing. And I was having trouble with the stanzas but I figured out how to get them to show up. Thank ...

A sonnet is a poem of sorts that is suppose to have a certain number of syllables in each line. At least I believe that is what it is, I ...

Thank you! And I didn't even realize I put a simile in it haha. :)

It's a perfectly fine review :) and thank you so much for your thoughts on this piece!

Haha you know me so well. :) and thanks for the feedback!

Thank you :)

Thanks for the review. :)

Yes, I did make the spelling errors on purpose when they were talking. Thanks for pointing out on some of the awkward wording I had and, mentioning some of the ...

Thanks for the advice! I would have added more conflict and made things more difficult but, I had a page limit plus a short amount of time to write it. ...

Thank you :)

I think it is really good... :) kinda makes me think of how it was like with me and my friend..... i am a little confused why it is called ...

It was suppose to be a nursery rhyme at first but I thought that it was a little to...... odd? to be one. You probably could sing it ;)

I wasn't really trying to imitate anything. It just came to me one day and I built on it.

As everyone eles says I think it is funny too. your something might be cooler than mine but, it doesn't work as well. haha I am funny. I haven't met ...

My teacher made my write it for a poetry unit we were working on.