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Heyhey there :) So this poem , uh i just love it ! :D The way it paints an image that stays in your mind. And makes you wonder about ...

This poem is so human and true. It's like life , has it's ups and downs , mosty remains interesting. I like how it's easy to read and understand. The ...

Heyhey :) or maybe the smiley isnt appropriate for a sad poem like this ... Lately i read a book about an orphan from the Vietnam war and this poem ...

Haha , this poem is so fun :D It's gonna be my first reviewing day and this really gave me some motivation and also a taste of what it will ...

The pictures this poem drew were just perfect. The image of a dead red rose was in my head til the very end. And I love the metaphor of dried ...

That poem is so sweet and pretty emotional . You describe exactly what happens and I love the metaphor of the skirt being a blade :) But you could use ...

It's really sweet :) But you could try to use more literary devices like metaphor , similie and things like that . They would make your poem less narrative and ...

Wow .. just wow . This poem gave me chills , it's thrilling and catchy and the spookiness of it just paralizes you. It had a great flow , especially ...

This made me wonder ... And i suppose that's a good thing when poetry makes you wonder . I love how the questions just get hung in the air and ...

Are you in love ?! That was the first idea that popped into my head after reading this . It has such a feeling of passion and love , like ...