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Hi 4revgreen! That was an awesome song. I loved the rhythm, the music, the tone, and both of your voices so much! I'd like to give you and your friend ...

Hi cherryblossoms (can I write it like that??). I'll be popping in to leave a review on your work - hope you find the advise useful! so i'm gonna start ...

Hi Liberty! I'm here again to review your work! (i hope you aren't internally groaning ;) ) I'm gonna start with the nitpicks firts: I got up and went to ...

Hi Mira (can I call you Mira?)! I'm hiraeth, here for a review. (I haven't actually read the other part, just popping in for some time!) So i'll just start ...

Hey Zoom! I've completed my exile, and am here to review again :D That’s why I notice immediately he isn’t in my arms. I mean, awww . Henrik's such a ...

Hi liberty!I didn't really read your previous chapters, just coming in here to give it a boost out of the green room; so it's probable that I'll get a few ...

Hi Aliceinhorrorland! I'm here to leave you a review on your work. Nothing of what I say is meant to offend; it's just tiny nitpicks and a reader's opinion :) ...

Hi nistha! Hiraeth here. Again, it's cool you're doing your thing and continuing with the hindi thing. Though I must admit, even though I'm a Hindi speaker, some of the ...

Hi soundofmind! This was so lovely! I got 'chasing cars' vibes off this (probably because I was listening to it while reading this), it goes pretty good with the music. ...

Hi Zoom! I'm back for a review! Must say, your writing just gets better and better. And tense problems is a long forgotten story. I've begun to admire Henry a ...

Hi Zoom! So I couldn't review the last part of this chapter; had been a bit occupied, but I'm back to give this one a review. ---- YES! Finally, things ...

Hi AmadeusW! Hiraeth here for a review. First, your writing is great; i noticed very few grammatical errors so i found the story very enjoyable to read. It was spooky, ...

Hi ole girl! Hiraeth here to give a short review. So, I love the theme of this poem; it connects very well to young adults (and by that, I mean ...

Hi Zoom! This is another great chapter; great job. So, the critique I'm gonna give here is really just very minor details and nitpicks that I think could've made the ...

Hi bellarke! I'm hiraeth, here to review this awesome poem! so first, the line "i used to be heartless, before you became my light." yes, i'm kind of annoying, and ...