Young Writers Society

If that's your voice, I must say it's ASMRtastic. I apsolutely love how relaxing this sounds yet gives me a sense of nostalgia for something I've never had.
If that even makes any sense.

Hi, Shikora here with another review for you.

Let's get to it.

Now this is a really cool song you have wrote here like always. The words all run together really well, I think you have done a really good job.

But I did see one thing, that needs to be fixed.
As I was reading I saw that you didn't put much punctuation in. Now this does kind of affect the flow of the words when I read it. I'm going to show you one or two places you can put some punctuation.

Here I’ll stay with you
Don’t tell me you don’t want me to
Here I’ll hold you close
Until I see your eyes closed

Hi soundofmind!

This was so lovely! I got 'chasing cars' vibes off this (probably because I was listening to it while reading this), it goes pretty good with the music. And well, its kind of funny that you had 6 likes and no reviews in here; but that's just how good this is: it needs no word, people are speechless at such a well-written song. I'm pretty sure some band will be ready to take this up.

We don’t have to get it right
Right away