tragicHearts

Hello sunshine1113 going to review this the best I can, so here we go. First I think you might want to reread this because I believe you will find a ...

Hello I'm here with the review for you. Wow I never thought death would sound so dangerously intoxicating. This is a really great strong prologue and I don't have any ...

Hello here goes the review I said I would give you. After reading the first chapter I got all excited to read this and it did not disappoint. You are ...

Here goes my wonderful review just for you to enjoy which I hope you do. First I think you need to change the text so it is not all in ...

Yeah I wish I could delete post instead of just the text too. Well when I get the chance I will go look at your story and review. Another way ...

Here goes my review the best I can do for not knowing the rules of poetry. This is really good and has a lovely flow that makes it easier to ...

Here goes my review hope you like it. This left me breathless and very vivid details that grip the reader from the start. Really not much else to say that ...

Hello here to give you a review hope you will enjoy it. Seeing how I'm weak with grammar still I will leave that for someone else to do. First I ...

Hello I like the others that have committed already enjoyed this very much. For the most part I understood the story. To be honest I was never really good at ...

Here goes my review which I hope you will enjoy. First I don't usually read a lot of dark stuff but this was really. I don't have anything to complain ...

Hello here to review the best I can. Note I'm not great at grammar myself so I will let someone else point grammar mistakes out. Instead I will just give ...

Hello always nice to meet other Christians Next time for song try to use line breaks instead of a paragraph. It is just more pleasing to the eye when reading ...

Okay I read part one then went straight to read this. With that being said on to the review and I hope you like it. Even though this is something ...

I like how I can paint a picture while reading without difficulty. I don't know a lot about poems to be honest but I found this very well written. It ...

Ok i read the first chapter then skimed through the rest. Here ar my thoughts hope you find then helpfull. For one i think you have improved sense the first ...