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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Not This Time

    Hello! The poem is really good, especially message-wise. You wrote a poem about something that happens to everyone - self-doubt and self-loathing (some people surpass these things, some people don't),

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Girl Who Waited

    Hi! Okay, first of all, you had me at 'The bright blue box' (because I'm obviously mad about the Doctor). Second of all, I loved the poem regardless of the ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: 25 Things to Keep in Mind When Surviving a Horror Novel

    Hi! I've been reading and watching horrors a lot this year and I've noticed the pattern. This is both hilarious and accurate. Maybe writers and film producers should take a ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Other » General, Literature Re: Nightly thoughts

    Hey! You put it into words! It's really good and I like it, especially because I feel the same way. Every sentence here is written well and if I quoted ...

    Oct 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Are you killing me with a kiss?

    Hi! Wow! Judging by the first verse I thought this would be a sappy love song but it definitely wasn't, which is an excellent surprise. I'm in love with this ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: A Grimace or Two

    Wow, these are the lyrics? I wonder how this sounds as a song. I read it as a poem but I really can picture it as a song, I just ...

    Oct 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: dying

    I like the poem - the theme, the gradation of lines. One knows from the start what will happen at the end of the poem, but there's this building up ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: you said, you said

    I loved the book and I love the poem. The main feelings and questions in the book are brought here really well. What impresses me the most is the end ...

    Oct 5, 2015


I don't do time.
— Liberty