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Hi, Justlittleoleme! So, first off, I really love this poem. The description is brilliant - it's sort of surreal and confusing. I like the way you have the metaphor with ...

Hi, Angelreader77! First off, I really liked this piece. I loved the surreal feeling in the first section, I think it sounds great in second person. I especially liked this ...

Hi Psudiname! Finally here to review ;). First of all, I really liked this, good suspense, and action. Normally this wouldn't be my kind of novel, but there's something interesting ...

Hey Jessa! First off, I think that this is an awesome poem XD. It has an air of mystery, some sort of soft secret that I shouldn't be hearing >.>. ...

Hey Sianiiee ^^ I think these are really good lyrics - it kind of reminds me of the eerie feel of Digital Daggers' lyrics (if you don't know them, trust ...

Hey lornydoo :3 This is a really great poem, and I love how you took from life. The imagery was awesome, and I could picture this all in my head. ...

Hi ehte92! Heh, I do contests to get rid of writer's block too :) *glares at Mr WB*. Anyhow, I thought this was really good, and it matched the picture. ...

This is awesome :P *smiles at your seven year old self*. I'm not going to give it a proper review though (which you probably don't want anyway ;)) heh. I ...

hmm. Well. Yes. I'm going to be honest with you and say that I didn't finish this. I just couldn't, because it went too quickly, almost every sentence was an ...

Hello, fellow Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem ;) I didn't quite get it, but all the same, I thought it was great, there was good emotion, and an ...

Here to review as requested! I really loved this, I think your idea is great, and the characters seem really interesting, especially their situations. It wasn't boring, and you made ...

Here to bamboozle you! Well, first off I think that it's good to be inspired by what you're writing, and that allthough they're only rough, I think they're pretty good ...

Here to Bamboozle you! I have to agree with HostofHorus on this one, seriously, I loved it. It was dreamlike and swirly and hazy. I don't think it matters that ...

Welcome to YWS! first off, I really liked this, it was good for a first post, and I liked the perspective on things, he could of done something, but he's ...

Aww, I liked this, it was kind of simple, but sweet. Matthews is right though, all you've really done is describe the picture, which was great, but I think you ...