tigershark17

Thanks guys! I will edit soon (when review day is over). And chapter two is coming!

Ooooh! i love your vocabulary! Your words literally create pictures in my mind. This is such a great poem! Great job, and keep writing!

WOw. Nice surprise ending there. That really threw me for a loop. Please post the next bit soon, so I can read! I really like this so far, very interesting. ...

Yeah, it was awesome! But I have it now, and it's really starting to fill up!

Wowee! This is so amazing! I love this poem so much. It seems so raw and full of dark emotion... Very descriptive and full of energy... Great job; I love ...

Wow, I really feel this poem. I have felt like this many times, and in fact, still do. This did an excellent job of conveying the feelings of an unloved ...

Wow! I can literally feel the emotion dripping off this poem! This is amazing! The rhyming was good, the flow was good, the word choice was excellent. I loved it! ...

Well, I think Jabberhut took care of all the picky stuff, and that's all I saw too. Otherwise, good job! I really like this poem; it's so sweet. Keep writing! ...

Thanks mike!

WOw; this was amazing! Very sad, but it just dripped with raw emotion. I love stories like this. Excellent job!!

If you like suspense at all, Dee Henderson has a couple great series. Also Unwind by Neal Shusterman, and Host by Stephanie Meyers.

oooh, creepy. One question: what is prising? Well, great job! I love this one too, not surprisingly! Haunting is still my favorite though! Keep writing; I want more!

Dangit! You can't like it more than once! ):

I saw the movie and hated it. How's the book in comparison?

RoseyUnicorn: You have to read 1984! It is so good! Trust me, you won't regret it. Ooh, and Animal Farm, too. That one's amazing.