tigeraye

thank you for reviewing, I appreciate it.

aaaaah dont take it as deragatory, Ive been enjoying this story, its good when a writer is able to let go of characters when the story calls for it. Its ...

ah, he won't though! I already have him planned out and everything ._. also don't be afraid of being mean in reviews, if my story is terrible, I'd rather you ...

hah, yeah, it's hard getting reviews sometimes when the green room is so overstuffed. I'll check out the first part later.

haha, then you succeeded at creating a good villain ^^ I don't think 50000 is too much if you upload it in pieces a bit at a time, but that's ...

ah yeah, its ok to stretch reality to make a more entertaining story. good work on it, I'll read more later ^^

Mikeys not going to end up being one dimensional though :(

thanks for reviewing

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hello, happy review day. I find your plot to be very enticing, and the fact that we don't know for sure whether or not she was actually the murder adds ...

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thank you for the review and the advice. Will make edits ^^

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yeah, I think that would be better. thanks for the help.

thanks for reviewing! I'm working on the next two chapters, then I'm taking a break to rework some of the other parts ^^ Do you think there should've been another ...