tigeraye

I hope you stick around and submit more stories here, because this is fantastic. So much so that I know I won't be able to do it justice with my ...

Hi, I like your style of writing. This is pretty well written, especially with the descriptions of the lions in the second paragraph. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes ...

I think this is a good start that with some polishing could become a really good story. The abrupt ending is odd, I'm not sure if you meant to end ...

I awoke, with no memory of who I was, or where I was. But there was a single thought. A calamity is coming, you must stop it. You have 400 ...

I like the concept here. Being in Virginia Tech on that day would bring a lot of terror and dread, which you did a good job of capturing. The story ...

He stood there, still, very still, sipping soda pops which tasted so much like sadness Soda pops that taste like sadness. Man, I love that. This is a good, sorrowful ...

I didn't read any of the other chapters so story-wise I can't really say too much. I can nitpick you a bit on spelling and style though. The two mysterious ...

I like your writing style. I guess the premise here is pretty simple - a woman walks home from work. One thing I like is how you used the weather ...

I like this story. I thought the king was being built up to be a bad guy, like the stereotypical king, abrasive and power hungry, but he ends up not ...

This is actually pretty neat. In 5 paragraphs you managed to create a character that could be interesting enough to star in a novel, with almost no dialogue. Actually, this ...