tigeraye

You have a very unique, laid-back style of narration, and it'll definitely be interesting to see just who that woman is. Overall, I find your plot to be intriguing, it ...

It sure has been a long year... So, this chapter setups for what seems to be a major plot line in Kieran's disappearance, but the main bulk of it was ...

I think what you have hear is a solid foundation, it just needs something to stand on it. There's a lot of intrigue between the main character and Mike's relationship, ...

I find this to be poetic and genuine. The emotion you're able to express in such a short passage is impressive, it's easy for the reader to actually feel the ...

Another interesting chapter. We knew sooner or later Do'amha was going to try and escape, because, well, it's called "The Elder Scrolls: Escape", so I'm glad we're getting into the ...

This is a very thought-provoking story. You manage to take the reader not just alongside Rowan's journey -- but THROUGH Rowan's journey, and you demonstrate the pain and agony Rowan ...

There a lot of things you did really well in this! Your writing itself is eloquent, and it really comes off feeling as if this narrator cares deeply for this ...

Aaaah, it only took me a little over three months to get back into this. If you behave yourself, this could be quite beneficial for all of us,” Omeloren chuckled. ...

Steven, my boyfriend, would be so amused watching me struggle right now. This sentence feels awkward because it feels like you trying to give us background on the main character's ...

I really like this. I think the message behind writing is more important than the semantics, and this has a really good message. I heard someone say a while back ...

I really like the description here. You have a great use of vocabulary, using strong and clever words at exactly the right time to really make us feel what the ...

It really annoys me that nobody has liked or reviewed this yet, because this is an amazing piece of writing. When I first looked at this chapter, you had me ...

This is a breathtaking story. Your writing by itself is incredible, I don't remember the last time I read a story that had such vivid and expressive emotional work. It's ...

It's so cool to see how much you've improved since the first chapter of the story I read. Your narration is so much more enthusiastic, your sense of detail is ...

You know, I've always been a character person, I like characters and I like good characters. This story has some really interesting characters in it, too. Sanskaar and his love ...