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Re: Untitled Fantasy Story: The Chalice of Life: Prologue
So, I'd like to know what your ultimate goal is for this novel. Do you have any plans on ever looking at publishing, or is it just something you write ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: Sunrise: Chapter 1
So I think the best way to describe this chapter would be hit and miss. First, I love the concept. The latter half of the chapter was incredibly endearing. The ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire: Chapter 1
Hi friend, I'm looking for a new novel to follow and your description sounded interesting so I'm deciding to read it. You already have some pretty great reviews so I'm ...
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: Distress in a White Dress
I thought the description of this story was fairly interesting, and decided to read it. I liked it, overall. I'm not a girl, and I haven't been cheated on, so ...
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: Swing Chapter 1
This is wonderfully well written. Your eye for small, intricate details is amazing; small things like the feel of the blood as Lila slips and bangs her knee are actually ...
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1.2 Nice to Meet You
“Okay, one more,” I chortle. It is junior year. I am higher than a kite and drunker than a redneck at a honkey-tonk.Well, not exactly. I took in three puffs ...
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: Out Of The Dark ~Chapter 1~
hi, friend, welcome to YWS. I see this has been sitting here for a while without any reviews, so I'll try to read through it for you x_x I was ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: The Bunker
Okay, so normally when I've been reviewing I'd read through the story and say my thoughts afterwards. This time I went ahead and read it and will just give me ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: The Unsinkable Disaster- Chapter 3
cool, you decided to keep going on this. Lets review x_x Anna and I had set off again when we discovered a hallway full of doors, cabins no doubt. We ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Bullies
Bullying is definitely an interesting, yet touchy and tough subject that has a lot of exploration room when it comes to writing about the issue. I look forward to seeing ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Hear My Voice
Just reading the description, I feel that it is quite an interesting idea. But I'd feel it'd be a difficult idea, as well. To capture the raw emotion, and true ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: The Old Centurion of Rome
We come to an evergreen forest, dark and shadowy and gilt with frost, and to an old roman soldier lying underneath a palace of stars. His sword, chipped at the ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Harvest
First off, the description is very eye-catching. Betrayal is a natural theme in a ton of literature, but to be upfront about it as this story is, it's very engaging ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Midnight Meeting
The silver moon sparkled off the serpentine fountain, shimmering on the terrace beyond. No one was about in that hour but two men, meeting on the veranda, drinking hot coffee. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Letter
The love letter sits on my desk. I hadn't opened it yet, but it looked tempting. My older sister, Alana, left it –or hid it– on her portfolio. An opening ...
Sep 27, 2015
