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thosethatgotaway

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Papercuts

    sorry i didn't you don't usually discuss it

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: leave

    thanks :)

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: leave

    thank you :)

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: Write the writer

    I like it :) This kinda confused me at first but then I re-read it a couple times and finally got the whole meaning. It was simply written yet had ...

    Feb 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Just a New City and a New Home

    thank you for the suggestions :) ill make sure to update it

    Feb 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: broken

    thanks for the feedback luka :)

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: broken

    thank you :) ill check yours out

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Renewed in White

    i really like how much detail you put in it. i like it a lot. :) you thought it well out and seemed to know what you were doing when ...

    Feb 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: To love.

    i really like the flow of this poem and the idea of posting for valentines day. I didn't really think of that because i don't have a valentine anyways :( ...

    Feb 14, 2014


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