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"That's perfectly fine, though! You need not get from the poem what I intended, in fact, I like that you say you get something else. As long as you feel/think ...

Hmm. What to say about this? Gosh it's very different. Overall, it is well written. Bettwe then before even though you changed it so much it was unrecognizable. That's not ...

Aha, this chapter was great! Hilariously funny. I liked it. But you might wanna work on your hook is the only thing. It doesnt chatch attention very well. Another great ...

Ohhh. SO you wrote this. Well, my feelings for this piece here were very very very strong. I absolutely loved it. I thought it soulful and amazing. You put it ...

Thanks guys. Honestly, I feel like I need to be TONS more clearer when I'm writing. I'm working on the issue. I'd like more critisim because I sent this in ...

It's actually very good. Some lines really stood out for me but I won't get into that. The ryhming didn't seem forced, which is great. The only problem I have ...

I see talent in my crystal ball :P good job

hmmh... hey buddy!!! I decided to give this a gold star :O is it about draco i very much liked it look at my work pally ily ♥

wow,, this was,,,, beautiful in my opinion. It i had to pick one word to describe id pick either beautiful or touching.. it amazed me.. PM me sometime... id like ...

Thank you guys! I'm really shocked that anyone liked this. I'd like to hear more comments on it.

I understand your point of view. Hey, youre a young writer? I was one once too. WHat you need to understand is tht this is very short and undetailed, I ...

I love this piece. I think it's good.. The rythm is okay It's not bad I VERY much enjoyed it :)

Honestly, I loved this, It was light and free.. Especially the second line... 8.5/10

Thanks. I made some spelling erros (woops) that made it seem like I was switching tense. That was accidental. I would like some creative critisim on it. What do you ...

I can really relate to this. I enjoyed it soooooooooo much. Except I disliked "Every kiss on the cheek is like knifes cutting my flesh." It sounded akward. Other than ...