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Sorry about the quick reply but I just wanted to say it reminds me of how I used to write when I was in the sixth grade! Haha

Interesting piece. I wouldn't call it poetry though...

Thanks for the review! And yes, tennis is my life! RAFA NADAL

The Idea of snow in the summer was to symbolize a sort of "never ending winter" in the life of a person in which they are always cold. It was ...

This is seriously beautiful. Enough said. I'd like to hear about how you came up with this. PM me about it if you can.

It's not a bad poem. I feel like you need more energy in it. That can come from using more metaphors, similies. Show me the story. Don't tell it. :)

Eh, it's not bad. Some lines were a lot better than others and the ending was just ok for me. It's not bad, all in itself.

I so need more reviews on this :)

Hehe, it's a really sweet piece. Some colorful word choice and nice use of grammar. Great story, made me chuckle. Really sweet ending too. You nailed it. 9/10

Hey angels_symphony, Here I am again, haha. I just love helping you out, anytimes, anywhere! Anyways, you replaced wicked with eternal. I didn't like that. I thought it was a ...

Well, I kind of abandoned this piece but here I am, editing it again. I just posted a reviewed version and I'm not quite sure if I got all the ...

You have the inspirtation; NOW GRAB IT! Write your heart out. Don't just do 2 lines. Write a whole freakin novel! :P That's my advice.

I'm sorry. I attempted to read it but just couldn't. Please please please edit it and NO CHAT SPEAK. Then a I shall review it.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful work. All my other comments have already been declared through the mouths of others. 8/10

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful work. All my other comments have already been declared through the mouths of others. 8/10