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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Don't Smile

    Hello there! Rosie here for a review. I will review as I read, so excuse me if it’s a bit long and messy. Here goes! …Ryan Turner, the love of ...

    Sep 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Flight of the Phoenix

    Hello there! Rosie here for a review. I really enjoyed this! I love all the imagery and the details that you included. The first stanza is my favorite, and for ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.

    Hey! Rosie here for a review. First off, I am very much impressed and in awe of your passion as an author, and as a person. I think that this ...

    Aug 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Reflection

    Hello, love. Rosie here for a review. Wow. I don't know what I was expecting, but definitely not that. In my mind this was going to be something off the ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Love Game Bliss

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not a huge fan of poetry. (No judgement, it's just not my strong point.) The flow of ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: My Supernatural Lover *Intro and Chapter One*

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review! I think I’m going to give you a line by line review, so it might be a little bit long. These are just ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review, as requested. I personally am not a fan of war stories, for reasons I cannot post on here. I really like the idea ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    SLUSHYFACE! Here's a review for you, just because you are fabulous and it's also review day. I'm gonna start with my little nitpicks. A lot of your sentences start with ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prologue - Shadowdale

    Hey there! Rosie here for a review on this glorious day of reviews. A furious deafening boom thunders above me, followed by a burst of flames erupting in the spot ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue

    Hello my dear Slushy-face! Rosie here for a review. I shall try not to be too biased in my review, although I do love you oodles and oodles! I decided ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The magic seal- Prologue

    Hi there! Rosie here for a review. I'm going t. Critique three major things during my review. First, I will talk about grammar and format. Second, I will talk about ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 2

    I got so excited when I saw there was a chapter 2! This chapter felt very short to me, but it was still very enjoyable. I do have a few ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 1

    You're a very talented writer! I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors, and your writing style is superb. You completely drew me in as the reader, and I was ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Acting Out

    Hello, love. Rosie here for a review. I’m going to start from the top and work my way down. She saw me facedown on the floor and stopped at the ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: How To Kill An Armchair

    WOW. This is quite a piece you've got here, my dear. Your writing style is so clear and so lovely. I could feel my eyes well up with tears at ...

    Aug 8, 2013


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane