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Re: Don't Smile
Hello there! Rosie here for a review. I will review as I read, so excuse me if it’s a bit long and messy. Here goes! …Ryan Turner, the love of ...
Sep 2, 2013 -
Re: The Flight of the Phoenix
Hello there! Rosie here for a review. I really enjoyed this! I love all the imagery and the details that you included. The first stanza is my favorite, and for ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.
Hey! Rosie here for a review. First off, I am very much impressed and in awe of your passion as an author, and as a person. I think that this ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Reflection
Hello, love. Rosie here for a review. Wow. I don't know what I was expecting, but definitely not that. In my mind this was going to be something off the ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Love Game Bliss
Hey there! Rosie here for a review. I really enjoyed this, and I'm not a huge fan of poetry. (No judgement, it's just not my strong point.) The flow of ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: My Supernatural Lover *Intro and Chapter One*
Hey there! Rosie here for a review! I think I’m going to give you a line by line review, so it might be a little bit long. These are just ...
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
Hey there! Rosie here for a review, as requested. I personally am not a fan of war stories, for reasons I cannot post on here. I really like the idea ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
SLUSHYFACE! Here's a review for you, just because you are fabulous and it's also review day. I'm gonna start with my little nitpicks. A lot of your sentences start with ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Prologue - Shadowdale
Hey there! Rosie here for a review on this glorious day of reviews. A furious deafening boom thunders above me, followed by a burst of flames erupting in the spot ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue
Hello my dear Slushy-face! Rosie here for a review. I shall try not to be too biased in my review, although I do love you oodles and oodles! I decided ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The magic seal- Prologue
Hi there! Rosie here for a review. I'm going t. Critique three major things during my review. First, I will talk about grammar and format. Second, I will talk about ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 2
I got so excited when I saw there was a chapter 2! This chapter felt very short to me, but it was still very enjoyable. I do have a few ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 1
You're a very talented writer! I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors, and your writing style is superb. You completely drew me in as the reader, and I was ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Acting Out
Hello, love. Rosie here for a review. I’m going to start from the top and work my way down. She saw me facedown on the floor and stopped at the ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: How To Kill An Armchair
WOW. This is quite a piece you've got here, my dear. Your writing style is so clear and so lovely. I could feel my eyes well up with tears at ...
Aug 8, 2013
