thetraveler

Thanks for both of the reviews! I really appreciate :) I think that it was a bad idea on my part to not read it aloud first; what may sound ...

Wow, that was a long but very helpful review! I really appreciate it. I guess that I do need reiviews, I just was asking not to have any on the ...

Ok! Thanks for the suggestions, I'll probably take them into consideration. (More likely use them...) I agree, I think that another stanza is a great idea. I'll add to it ...

Very cute and GOLed (giggled out loud) and it serves a purose: thanking Nate :)

This seems unfinished...

Sorry, I guess that was harsh. I really liked it and I thought that the nice punch line at the end was amusing. I would love to see more writing ...

Thanks Ninja! I expected you to critisize me on the rhyme scheme or lack there of so thanks for NOT doing that :)

Thanks Crescent! I agree;my puntuation needs improvement...

I am sorry about all of thise mistakes... forgive me, the keyboard and I were disagreeing... but we're fine now :)

Thanks a ton! I agree tha the rhyme scheme changed a bit around the middle

Thanks so much guys! I guess that you're right about the rhyming thng, I'll work to get that fixed soon:) :) Thanks again, Traveler:D

Does anyone like this? What do you think about it? :?: