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I think it was okay but like the others said it need more emotion. Also, I think for this"so why dont try looking forward instead" you should try saying Why ...

I kind of like this, it gave a sense of mystery which, I think greatly added to the poem. Also, it makes the reader want to find out who this ...

I kind of liked this some of it seemed a little off though. Like "Which way do I make you understand?" I think this would sound better if you said ...

It seems more like a message to a friend than a poem. Sense, you wanted this to be about your friend I think perhaps, a poem about what they mean ...

I think it was kind of vexatious how you keep repeating things inevitably. I think I would rewrite this so it sounds better perhaps, work on forming imagery about how ...

I think this was a good poem; it gave the sense of melancholy thus, giving the poem the emotion that you intended for it to have. Sorry about you losing ...

I kind of agree with spike71294 it didn't really seem to be in a poem format. But, I did like this though. It seems to tell a story which, I ...

I kind of like this poem it was written very well and I think you capture how you truly feel about this person. At first, I thought the last line ...

I thought it was okay it could be better though and I think it's kind of short. And, there is so much repletion of "Lord oh Lord." Which I think ...

I thought it was quite good and it succeeds in giving us that sense of mystery. I do think that you should try a bit more to show us how ...

Wow, this really informs people about how bad animal abuse is. It was quite sad about what was happening to the puppy and you really explained about how the puppy ...

I think insted talk about them emotions you go through when having someone cheat on you. Show us it makes you feel. I beleive that good poems gives us emotions ...

I kind of like this and how it's when you grow older you sometimes forget about the past. The only thing is that the past makes the future so it's ...

I like this poem because I can relate to it; people are always bullying me and they think they are so much better than me. But, I can never see ...

Hi Kris-san! I liked how you showed us how important this person is to you and how art cannot capture the true wonder of this person. The only thing though, ...