thetaostedwriter

Hi there! Taost here for a little review!

Hi there! This was a little hard for me to understand, but I read through it a few times. I think this is so cute, but it does have a ...

Hi there! For starters, this is a cute little poem. It's light and sweet. There are a few things I can point out that might need adjusting, but other than ...

Heyyy! One) Welcome, Welcome to YWS! I promise you, it's an amazingly warm community, and it's so interactive. There will be dead days where nothing pops up, but you'll enjoy ...

Hey there! So I noticed, we share a similar format with our writings. I, too, am guilty of using dialogue to end a short story, but it adds to the ...

Okay, for starters, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! I'd curse, but I believe that's against guidelines. This is absolutely gorgeous. You are an amazing writer! Everyone here is! Never doubt your abilities! ...

Jesus. That's all I have to say to this. This is such a bitter tasting poem, in a good way. It makes the heart twist, the lungs ache. It makes ...

Hello! So, at first, this poem made me feel cold. Just the first stanza alone made me stop and go, "Oh.. wow...". That's how much it impacted me. It's beautifully ...

Heyyy! I love this. Yes, I'm getting straight to the point and I know I say I love a lot of things, but this. I really like this. It's realistic. ...

Hey there! So, from a first glance, this is hard to follow. It's probably just me, since I'm more of a writer, not much of a poet, though I do ...

Hiii! First thing I noticed off a whim is the paragraphs. It seems to be quite common, and it's an easy fix. The thing I noticed was how long they ...

Hi there! So, all in all, this is a good story. My best advice off a whim is to shorten the paragraphs. It's a common thing and it's perfectly fine, ...

This is interesting. I mean, really, it is. I didn't think anything of it at first, it was a bit confusing in the beginning and I felt that mentioning the ...

Hi there! So far, I really like how your parts are labeled. They really help the story progress. I also really like the transition from Cold to Warm. That helped ...

This is heavy and extremely relatable. I honestly don't know how to approach this. It's such an uncomfortable but common topic. It hurts, it really does. And seriously, there isn't ...