thepapermonster

Hey, so this is kind of a review but feel free to just regard (or disregard) this as just my personal opinions. The fast GOT-TO-GET-OUT-OF-HERE vibe/pace probably would have been ...

Guten Aben! I liked the beginning. Like Remy, I laughed inwardly at the family that tried to take everything they owned with them as they ran from the fire. As ...

Listen to Vermillion by Slipknot while reading. There's Vermillion lyrics in here. Treats if you find them.

It'll make more sense if you read The Gray Chapter One here. It's the first draft to expect it to suck.

You did very well building up that suspense. Overall it was well written. Captivating, much enjoyed by people with my imagination. Started simple but mysterious. I didn't get that the ...

Fixed.

This. Was. AMAZING! I don't like reviewing poetry because it's all about the writers style, and I have no right to judge it. But I will say this is a ...

This. Was. AMAZING! I don't like reviewing poetry because it's all about the writers style, and I have no right to judge it. But I will say this is a ...

Interesting enough, but, at the end I didn't want to try the link. Your writing style doesn't resonate well with me. But it was concise, I like concise. But I ...

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I like this because I feel like I am that person, this is someone I relate to, once in a while. And it is my favourite kind of poem, the ...

This is short, it has meaning and makes me think, and better yet, it doesn't rhyme! I love it! I would have liked to have read more about it but ...

This is by far the best poem I have read here... so far. I can't say that I absorbed enough of what I was reading to understand anything, my attention ...

I actually looked at this because I expected to read something with a lot of perspective from a simple view that is slightly funny. Then I am met with this. ...

Wow, this made me unbelievably sad. I got curious to check out your other works, I like this one a lot more but I kinda regret reading it. Congratulations, you ...

I believe I mostly have good things to say about this piece. It is rather sad, but not so much because there really is no reason for us to care ...