thepapermonster

Hey, so most of this is my opinion so feel free to ignore me. I usually believe that starting a work with dialogue is a no-no but after seeing it ...

Hey, so this is kind of a review but feel free to just regard (or disregard) this as just my personal opinions. The fast GOT-TO-GET-OUT-OF-HERE vibe/pace probably would have been ...

Hey, I have a bit of a review, but most is praise. This is a masterpiece. First paragraph is great! Amazing introduction into a story, got me hooked right away ...

Okay, here we go. This could be interpreted as my personal opinion, but here's my review. Sorry it's long-ish. So first, for the story as a whole, there is a ...

Okay, this is long, and more of my experience than a review. Creepy. You did a great job unnerving me. In the first few paragraphs I was actually nervous. The ...

Okay. Here we go. Sorry it's a bit long. The same thing happens to me when I copy and paste one of my works here. The little icons like the ...

Hey! So, I really did enjoy this piece A LOT, but my head isn't really in the right place to fully enjoy it. I am always so distracted. But here ...

Guten Aben! I liked the beginning. Like Remy, I laughed inwardly at the family that tried to take everything they owned with them as they ran from the fire. As ...

Okay, this is nice so far. To me the girl is a character I want bad things to happen to, I don't know if you intended this or I am ...

You did very well building up that suspense. Overall it was well written. Captivating, much enjoyed by people with my imagination. Started simple but mysterious. I didn't get that the ...

I like this because I feel like I am that person, this is someone I relate to, once in a while. And it is my favourite kind of poem, the ...

I. AM. AMAZED! I have nothing to say critique wise. Like literally! All I can give is my praise! So, content wise, this is so interesting. And you spin the ...

Okay, content wise, starting off very ordinary leaves anticipation as to what is it that makes these characters so important to write about, and is a wonderful mystery if you ...

This is adorable. I like May, her being so painfully shy is relatable to me, honestly. But I don't try to make friends, she's desperate for some. I think it's ...

Easy read. Cute. I can relate to it. It's somewhere I've been before. Actually I think I lot of people have been here before. So it is very generic. But ...