themanofstars

Thanks for the review but you posted it three times and after comments its difficult to get more people's thoughts or reviews so if you could delete two of it.

Thank you. It means a lot. And next time i will try better.

Thought of reviewing it but can't cause its perfect and did i say its awesome.

You really got the talent in poetry.I can't review. I think its perfect.

The idea is good but you can present it in a more beautiful way. Just add a bit more small touches. The last two lines could be rephrased. like you ...

Sorry mate but i saw that coming. I think you made it obvious by the way you wrote it.

That was really a perfect well written and thought out short. I was able to picture every thing and felt that i am watching everything over there. I am gonna ...

Best thing for a writer is criticism. I found the idea or the topic really good.I feel the same way actually. You can improve the way you have wrote, make ...

Yesterday, today and tomorrow - three faces of the same head - Good idea. The first version starting was good but as the poem progresses I found it a bit ...

That was a really good one.

Thank you I do agree on the unrealistic part and I will improve. According to me, for a writer criticism is the best way to improve. Thanks a lot mate.

Thank you I do agree on the unrealistic part and I will improve. According to me, for a writer criticism is the best way to improve. Thanks a lot mate.