theironnovelist

thanks! i appreciate every word:)

Ok I see what you mean

thanks! one thing I'd like to mention: when I wrote 'flesh' I was thinking in context of the plural 'lips', so 'lips flesh' rather than 'lips fleshes'. Should I still ...

thank you! I thought it would be easier on the reader and more visually organized if I could section the essay up into chunks pertaining to each thought of the ...

thanks! the title may be misleading as i didn't mean for the poem to be about Eden specifically, but more connecting to the feeling of longing for heaven.

thanks! the title may be misleading as i didn't mean for the poem to be about Eden specifically, but more connecting to the feeling of longing for heaven.

it helps to understand the context- this is a short piece of history and only one chapter in the overall novel. this is chapter 4. i segmented it into three ...

thank you very much...i was surprised to come on after a few days to see this on the front! completely made my day...seriously. best blessing of the night. :)

thanks! 'Eden' refers to hope of a place as perfect as what once was the garden of Eden.

thanks. as mentioned before, the parenthesis around 'a' was placed there because I wasn't sure whether or not to add the word. I've edited the piece quite a lot as ...

thank you very much! this is the only chapter (at this point) in this style. the rest of the novel is in third person with characters and all that. this ...

thank you! yeah the parenthesis around 'a' were because I wasn't sure I wanted it or not. I agree with everything you said thanks so much!!

nooo problem! :)

I really appreciate having someone review so much of my stuff! Thank you so much!

thanks bestie :) even though you're on the green team...