thehobbitgangster

Hey, so this seems like a good sort of ballad type of song. I haven't heard the song by the Fray, but the lyrics on their own could be cool ...

Hey, I thought this was really well done. The melody you put to the words was really pretty and worked very well. The word choices were powerful and I think ...

Firstly, this is a great song!!! Anywho down to some reviewing... As people have said before me there are a few places that are out of rhythm due to either ...

Hello there! So, the way the lines are so short I can almost see this as a rap with the chorus being sung, but that's just the way I interpreted ...

Hey! So, just a few things. The line "I'm been trying to breath, but I'm fighting for air" should be "I'm trying to breathE, but I'm fighting for air". The ...

These were sweet lyrics with a really cute message, but weren't overly sappy or anything like that. The formatting was perfect and I really liked how you introduced two separate ...

Firstly, is this a poem or lyrics? It doesn't show typical song stuff (chorus, bridge, verse, etc.) besides having verses. Other than that, it keeps a consistent rhyme scheme, although ...

Hey! This was a really fantastic parody! I love this song and I think that the concept went with it very well. Any who, a couple of things... The line ...

This was a really sweet poem. I actually liked the last line because I thought it was funny. I didn't know if you were trying to be serious or making ...

Hello there! Firstly, these lyrics work very well. I can imagine them to a pop ballad, maybe even with a little country twang. I just have a couple nit-picky type ...

This poem was a lot different than I expected from the title. I was suspecting dark and scary, but was pleasantly surprised with whimsical and nice. It was very imaginative ...

So, I had to read through this poem a couple times because there was so much in it. It confused me at first, but I think I got it in ...

Hola! I agree that this poem does get a bit lengthy especially at the end. So, the second line of the poem seemed a little awkwardly worded to me. To ...

Hola! So I do believe you chose a very appropriate genre for this song. The whole goth ballad idea works well with the lyrics and their tone. Anyways, firstly I ...

Hello there! My first thought on this piece was that it seemed to be more of a poem rather than song lyrics. It just seems a little short is all ...