thecolorofthesky

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy my style. I have a poem called "It's 9:00 on a Saturday" that is similar to this. I wrote a couple of these pieces ...

Thanks! I was just about to say that my works definitely have a style to them. If you do read more of my works, let me know how you like ...

Thank you for the great review. I'm very glad you pointed these things out. I'll try to revise this, but I'd definitely like more feedback from you. Now that I ...

Has any one watched the video at the bottom? I would like some feedback if it's relevant or if it should be removed. Thanks for all the amazing reviews! With ...

That's a good idea! I probably need to fix the description of the poem too.

Of course! Believe me, I know. I had trouble creating stanzas and almost lost my mind. In the publishing center when you are editing your poem you should see a ...

Thanks! I'll be working on the revisions for this today. In the last part of your review you get the feeling that I'm portraying people as more broken than monsters. ...

I'm glad you could relate to this. Alot of feeling went into this piece. I have another new piece called "Rocks" that is slightly similar and might lift your spirits ...

Thank you so much!

I keep changing the poem into stanzas yet it publishes as a huge chunk?

Thanks! When I originally wrote it in Google Drive, it was in stanzas. Those apparently didn't hold up through copy and paste? Anyway I shall fix it. As for the ...

I've revised taking your review into consideration. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks clogs!

I tried to keep it brief. I have more if you'd like. I'm a debate kid so I could go on forever. ;)

I'm glad to hear you could relate to it! I was afraid of posting poetry publicly in fear of no one being able to relate to my writing. The comment ...

Hi there! When reading this I could see two audience perspectives. First being of those who are out of school. To me it felt like a poem to start the ...