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So I really like this story, its creepy, mysterious, sweet, and gently humorous. And not many writers can manage to successfully weave in all those elements. It often comes off ...

Wow, I mean really, wow. This is really good, probably one of my favorite things you did was the repetitious 'thud... thud' it reminded me a lot of Edgar Allen ...

~~"No thankfully you are not late.~~ There should be a comma after No ~~She'd saved the kingdom of Julan from complete an utter destruction nearly killingherself in the process.~~ And ...

Foreboding, eerie, and oddly humorous. Well I guess it'd be called dark humor. Anyway, it's an realistic idea told intriguingly with an edge of mystery while at the same time ...

Here is a quick review for your story, hope its helpful! So first off a great story with a very real main character with very real problems. I was rooting ...

So, first off, wow, this is such a cool idea! I mean all of mythology mashed into one story! Why has no one ever thought of this! So, yes brilliant ...

Here my quick little review, hope it's helpful I really like this (and I'm not even a big poetry person). It's a bit eerie and a touch creepy, but the ...

Hi :) here is my quick little review for Fireflies. For the most part I really like it, it got me curious about the world you painted. Which is my ...

Good, very good :) it sounds a lot like a song to me, something to be sung with a low guitar and maybe a piano. Nice rhyme scheme, though at ...

I like this poem, it really made me smile (not many poems do that). It did make me hungry too, but anyway I liked the movement of the poem, the ...