theanderman

Hello there, and happy Review Day! Never read an essay here before, so lucky you! From my perspective, everything you said is valid and fairly justified. You certainly manage to ...

Happy Review Day! It is happy, actually, because I really liked this little piece. I'm a horror/suspense fan anyway, but this is a good example of the genre. What I ...

Hello there! I saw the word dystopia and had to check this out. You know about the grammar issues, those have been all pointed out already. I won't go into ...

I was afraid this would turn out to be another bland horror piece after the extended warnings of "stop reading now", etc. I ignored them, however, and I'm glad I ...

An intriguing look at a crazy period in life. Right off the bat, I'm at the same period right now and I totally understand everything that's going on, it's scarily ...

I'm actually into the rhyming, it reads very smoothly. Perhaps it detracts from the quite serious subject, but as a very short piece the effect isn't too bad. This is ...

I have to say, I'm certainly interested in seeing something come from this. The premise is intriguing, and what little we've seen of our central characters has piqued my curiosity. ...

Whilst not totally original, the idea of having alcohol be like a lover is still very fun to me. I am drawn to the focus on the real effects of ...

This short passage, though young, certainly has potential to become something pretty exciting. The mixture of the new world created and our current world creates an interesting set of interactions, ...

Whoever Jake is, I certainly don't want to be him right now. The paragraphs, though only a couple of sentences each in length, have a distinct venom in their brevity. ...