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Oh wow, this is absolutely beautiful! Usually, many poems I read don't exactly flow very well especially when their rhyming. Although with yours, it's the exact opposite! I really like ...

Oh wow, I never thought about it in that way. Simply spectacular! There aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes, and it was really well done. But just remember that there's ...

Yes, finally! A piece of writing that has a clear and very important moral! Finely done; really, it's amazing. The way you describe it all really makes it hard not ...

Oh my, this is absolutely stunning! The eyes are beautiful and I just love the way you made everything else neutral so that the eyes could pop out. I think ...

Wow, I could actually feel all of Brady's rage radiate on my computer screen. Ha-ha. This was really good, and I liked it a lot. Although, when you wrote "I ...

Wow, this piece has such beautiful imagery and description. Wonderful job! It was like reading a very magical moment. The only errorr I see is that you put some dashes ...

This poem is the epitome of cruel beauty. It was dark, haunting, and passionate all at the same time! Bravo! Reading this is like being wrapped into a blanket of ...

Short and sweet. I like it! It's really cute and I bet that girl will love it if you read it to her. Ha-ha. The only error is that.. my ...

Ha-ha. Your character reminds me a lot like Ariel in the Little Mermaid with all her spunk, beauty, and desire to be independent. And not to mention, her interest in ...

Awww, this kind of situation always breaks my heart. When a girl's best friend hides his feeling and then completely regrets it later on. Your piece was very nice, but ...

I always love it when a writer writes about writing. Ha-ha. :D This is wonderful, and in my opinion, exactly how I feel about words too! The only error is ...

Oi...... This piece needs a lot of work. It didn't really flow well, and as far as spelling and grammar goes....well, it looks like you copied it out of a ...

This is wonderful. Absolutely, positively wonderful. All four essays are amazing and show a style that is both erudite and filled with personality. Yes, you definitely have great talent as ...

Wow. This was actually a very interesting piece. Not many people choose to write about a person with short-term memory loss. I found reading this made me quite impatient, which ...

Well I think it's obvious that you've definitely know your character's personality! Although there are some grammatical errors. (but I won't list them since the others already did). Also, if ...