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Hey there, Thanataphobic here for a review! This is a mediocre piece. There are certain aspects of the story you could strengthen and/or fix, and here they are: - Grammatical ...

Hey there, Thanataphobic here for another review! This poem is so full of emotion and power, it knocked me off my feet. Anyway, I'm just going to lightly brush over ...

Hey there, Thanataphobic here for a review. Now this is what I call a story. That was just... magic. I could feel the emotion and the torment that Eric felt, ...

Hey there, Thanataphobic here for a review! ... Wow. Honestly, that was one of the most entrancing things I have ever read. Since I can't manage to find any negatives, ...

Hey there, Thanataphobic here for a review! I really, really enjoyed that story! Right from the start I got pulled into a very bittersweet romance that just ensnared my mind ...

Hi there! This is Thanataphobic here for a review (: Firstly, good job on the first paragraph! I personally believe that first paragraphs are extremely vital in giving the reader ...

Hiya! Nata here for a quick review (: First thing I noticed was the name 'Jengo'. I personally don't like it when writers choose really out of the box names ...

Hey there! This is Nata here for a quick review (: The first thing I'd like to say is: awesome piece! Super excited for the next installment! So some things ...

Hi! Nata here for a little review. I'd just like to say I'm no expert on poetry so I'm so sorry if this isn't very helpful! Firstly, wow. That was ...