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Thank you so much!

Thank you! I don't really have writer's questions, the poem is sort of an extrapolation of personal experience, if you will.

Hi! I'm in awe! I really, really liked this poem, you've captured that whimsical feeling and kept the angst tight, and it's really wonderful! "how many seconds it takes for ...

and my world is red is all i see is red Really like this line! Almost like a chant, that's overlapping each other, and each sentence is part of the ...

Thank you, CATS!

Thank you so much

This is sort of a continuation to my previous poem ( are you aware of my existence (or is it all just a dream)). While the first one talked about ...

Hi! I really like the premise of this poem! Almost as if there is a alternate world where ideas exist as bubbles, and soft wisps of light that float around ...

Thank you so much! This review is so thorough, and is certainly very helpful!

Thank you so much! You're too nice

So, this is the first ever poem that I've written that's not for a school project. At first, I thought this was too rough to post, but I really wanted ...

This reminds me of Achilles and Patroclus.

They look so good, wow!

Yes! Of course. I don't know what tips to give you tho XD I'm not that experienced myself. I will try to come up with something.

Lmao, the more original, the better!