tennishead

Hey Tennishead here, I really enjoyed your story. Your beginning was excellent and you immediately put the reader on the scene instead of taking a paragraph or two to introduce. ...

Hi, Tennishead here, Wow! This story is deep and dark! The overtones are there from the start and I was really enthralled by the concepts and emotions that the girl ...

Hey, Tennishead here, I enjoyed this story. I especially found that this part resonated with me, There’s no going back… stopping won’t change anything…the world around you is only going ...

Hi Tennishead here, I liked your story. You described Diablo really well and I got an impression of a fierce, vicious and evil competitor who would stop at nothing to ...

Hi Tennishead here, I agree with CandyWizard, your punctuation needs a fair bit of work. It doesn't just look bad, it affects how the reader perceives the story. For instance, ...

Hi Tennishead here, I really liked your story predominately how it was written. You had me captured in the story right from the beginning. The imagery was great and I ...

This story really set my imagination into overdrive! It felt like I was a spectator of the battle and the detail that you put into the imagery and the plot ...

G'day I found this short story pretty cool. I liked the twist about the father too! But I just found a few things that could do with some fine tweaking. ...

I found this quite an interesting read! What inspired you to write this? At the start, I had this image of an old widow who was reflecting on her past. ...

I thought this was a great story. The imagery in your story was fantastic! Throughout the piece, I was "there." It felt like I was transported into the forest. The ...

I'm going to launch straight into this, 1: Okay, so your grammar needs a bit of work. During the piece, there are many cases where you have lower capital I's, ...