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No thank you!!! :) No problem glad to have shared!

I read this to my seven year old nephew just a bit ago. He woke up from a nightmare. He now is sleeping again with a smile one his face. ...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Amazing. I felt the emotion contained in this poem. You did a great job. Keep up the work.

Hello. So i like it but i feel like it could use a tiny bit more emotion. I really like your word choices. Other then that you did a greqt ...

Thank you all for your comments but it isnt finished. I barely even bagain writing it. I wil ltake all you thoughts into consideration.

TazmaniaGirl, Thanks you for your review and thanks for reading. And Thanks for the sweet review and i will write more because i love to write. Most of my writing ...

Nargles , Thank you for your review and your advice. Thank you for giving me a few pointers on writing it's very much appreciated. :)-T

Passion, I want to thank you for your advice. I don't think you were being harsh at all. I think you were being helpful and thoughtful. I will take your ...

thank you Sidney. I like this website because every one here is so supportive and very helpful. :)-T

Passion, Thank you as well.I love getting advice from other writers. I see what you mean on the line breaks and comma's. I will take your advice because you gave ...

Demoness, Thank you for your helping words. I see what you mean with what you said, If you have any thing that will help with my writing please let me ...

Thanks you for the review and it's not rude at all!!!! I don't think your a grammar snob at all, your just helping a fellow writer!I'm so used to my ...

I know I hate a lot of errors and spelling errors, I wrote this way back in 2010. And i write in a notebook. Thanks for your advice. I normally ...