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Yeah a love story i'm so obsessed with. Thank you.

Thank you (a)

Yeah well you should shut up I guess because its not our problem if you're a lifeless loser with no one loving you. So keep your advice for yourself because ...

A strong point of this piece was your language and description, which is especially shown in the first paragraph, it really draws the reader in an creates some beautiful imagery. ...

I will work on improving it more. Thank you :)

Thank you so much

Appreciate your help thanks

Thanks alot ;)

Thank you for drawing my attention to really important aspects. I will work on that a little bit more.:)

I appreciate every positive aspect u said as well as the negative ones. Having a person "chill" by words actually feels great. And I considered it an essay because I ...

Yeah my favorite sentence is "when a giving hand is an unrecognized gesture" too :D . And it seems my words have given u "chills" as well which gives me ...

I could clearly notice that this is actually flawless. And it"s easy to relate to. Every girl out there could read her own story through these line. The only negative ...

Valkyrie17 Yeah my favorite sentence is "when a giving hand is an unrecognized gesture" too :D . And it seems my words have given u "chills" as well which gives ...

kingofwernogs, I appreciate every positive aspect u said as well as the negative ones. Having a person "chill" by words actually feels great. And I considered it an essay because ...

Honestly, this was wow-ed me! Just keep on doing what you're doing