tammy777

Hi there I love your poetry except for it could have been more long and delineated. I can understand how you feel about the books. Years have passed, humans grow ...

Hi there It is indeed a lovely poem. You described about the beauty of moonlight and trees. Moreover you also talked about the serenity and darkness existing along. "We've had ...

Hi there Hope you are fine. Guess you have recently been through a break up. If so no need to regret and enjoy your life. However your poem is much ...

Hi there Nice story line. The ending is good and great. "Just run!" He yelled. Running, running again. Is this all I do? When will this end? A cliff... dropping ...

Hi there Last time I reviewed on your first chapter but I didn't realize it is a novel. Nice done. I am eagerly waiting for chapter three but I request ...

Hi Tammy is here to review First of all it is sort of fairy tale like Cinderella but gradually I started reading and in the end I was impressed. It ...

This is a lovely story full of drama and mystery. I loved the confusing character of Phoenix she really made it. It was hard to be normal with no-care attitude ...

Hi I like your imagination. I guess you are obsessed with sci-fi. Your characters are kind of alien oriented and have no connections with ordinary men. I admire such kind ...

Hi Well of course the poem is good.The story and the pain of the mother can be seen but a lot is unsaid like how her child is an inspiration ...

Hi I love the poem. It is fine and simple. You have emphasized the emotions and the pains inside the girl though the title of the poem suggested something else. ...

Hi Nice poetry. I loved the whole concept of this short poetry. But i want to see more of it. I loved the way you started but please try to ...

Hi Nice poetry. I personally the way you demonstrated 'where the demons reside' .It's true that our thoughts shape the world so it's important how we should see the world ...

Hi Short and meaningful. It's good though . 'Yes I’ve seen him before In the wars of this world That’s where the Devil resides' The last three lines were really ...

Nice art. I love the kind nature of the gentle person who just rush here and there without giving it a second thought. II wish the world would have been ...

Hey The poem was good and thoughtful. I was wondering if the lover is dead or so. I didn't really get it as the last word 'black' confused me. The ...