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High above he sails the sky, A starry waste he passes by. An opalescent globe, wrapped in an argent robe; The Sun behind his tail, he's ever on the fly. ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS, sorry it's late. It's a great community here, I hope you enjoy yourself. Your piece was lovely. I loved your hook and it kept me wanting ...

Hello Grant! I see you are a new member. Welcome to YWS. You have an idea here, (obviously) but you need to give us more as readers. We are craving ...

To be honest, the ending of this poem seemed to harsh for the way it began. A gun comes into the picture rather randomly. If you meant this to strike ...

This could be a good piece but as I agree with the above review, I have no clue who "they" are. Your idea of "they" switches on and off. The ...

Drip! Drop! Drip drop! [clever hook] It's raining I thought to myself [thoughts are usually put in quotations but maybe you ignored this purposely? But I've also seen it without ...

This was pretty good. Some colorful use of words, good imagery at times. Usually my reviews are quite detailed but that's only when I have some very serious opinions to ...

May this only be pretend, our use for each other as reflective muses. First stanza, I think you should have more of a better what's called a "hook" here. The ...

Hmm.. At first I thought "This poem is going to be a total bust". I apologize if that offends you. This poem was beautiful although the first stanza was a ...

From his heart grew a red red rose as deep and passionate as the sea, but as strong as steel. He shared it with her, his lover in which the ...

You loved me once, do you remember. From April, June, to September. GREAT BEGINNING! (: You were so confident. I was shy. I had never cried over a guy. Then ...