surajjangid

Good work you have done at first attempt. I liked the two line sin your poetry.. Bad poetry is undeserving of Reincarnation. Literature is something which we can reincarnate. every ...

I think if you rewrite this in song form then it would sound good. Words are good. I dont understand this line Falling through the center of the earth the ...

Your lyrics have pain of something, showing that someone left you just for himself. I like this line "Do you keep trying to remember the way I laughed." its showing ...

Good i like your love for nature. I don't know what to say but i like it too much. One line was awesome "I see the sun, but it sees ...

You wrote not that well but good then me as if you have words and i have only feelings which want words. I learnt something and i hope it will ...

Yours irony is similer to me. I am studying in school and finding a friend and love, may i found her in my life. she is beautiful and caring too ...

Everyone scare in his/her first start. i too scared but someone made me realize that mine ideas are better then all just you wanted a words. i want to say ...

You did a fantastic job but sorry to say the way of writing has to be change once. After that you will find your writings better. It made me remember ...

I sorry to say but you should learn about poetic devices to give a flow to your poems. In the middle of poem i found some flow but later it ...

Firstly, i want to say that poem is good but middle in the reading i found myself in confusion, don't know where? One line i don't understand.you also gave explanation ...