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This. Is. Amazing. It's dark, and beautiful. Lovely job, keep writing!

thanks :)

thanks. really :D so much.

I really liked how you conveyed the wars that everyone has in their minds. I usually do not like rhyming poetry but you did a good job with it here. ...

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thanks, and I actaully hadn't thought about the greenday similarities, but you're right. I'm glad you liked it!(:

thanks(: I have more work similar to this in my portfolio if you'd like to take a look.

Hi there! I really enjoyed this, but the flow was a bit choppy in places. If you go back and put some puntuation in a few places it will read ...

Wow...this was really good. I loved the descriptive words and phrases you used to make the imagry in your piece very realistic. I really liked it, and it made me ...

thanks lexi!(:

This is amazing, I have tears in my eyes haha. After I finished I spent about five minutes just staring at the screen in awe. You used beautful imagry and ...

This was very sad, but brilliant just the same. I agree with the stanzas, but otherwise this was beautifully written. Great job! Keep writing!(:

thanks guys! And yes, i do agree that the rhyming is a bit, shall we say, awful. I don't usually rhyme in my poetry, but I though I'd try it ...

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thanks Ignatius5453, I tohught it seemed a bit off, but it was something I felt like I wanted to add, I'll try to get it to flow better. :)