summergrl13

Yeah, monkeys! I guess monkeys can write some pretty good plays;D! I always make this mega-hott monkey at hte end of each comment so here it is; 0(o.o)0

I really enjoyed this piece! I think that you worked really hard on it and I loved it! Don't stop writing! This is totally unique and sort of a new ...

Yeah, it's really repitious and it's not much of a poem. It'd need to be longer, have more details, be in poem form, and it'd need some editing too. 0(o.o)0

Yeah! Still lovin' all the chocolate! Woo! Go choco and go teh wozzinator!!! 0(o.o)0 (The monkey's still hottttt;)!!)

This is a really weird piece and it makes no sense whatsoever! You need to make it longer, the Edward Cullens part (although he wicked hot) can go and I ...

I totally agree with cloudy.skiesx! You have to right more and I'll be waiting.

Loved it! Don't stop writing songs!

It sounds like a shorter version of the chapter in my book. Have you read my book called 'Nothing's Fair in Teen Love and War'? Because it sounds remarkably like ...

I love the story of Cleopatra! It's my favorite Egyptian tale and I adored learning about the Egyptians in sixth grade! Very good detailing and very elaborate. Nice job! 0(o.o)0

I read the book about Sadako and the thousand paper cranes too in fourth grade and again last year. It was soooo sad:.(. I think that your goal is awesome! ...

Oh ouch! I would have backslapped that girl all the way to next Friday! Good story, very gripping. It's one of the stories you just can't stop reading! Keep writing!

I think it's fun and interesting but you spelled Samurai 'Samuria'. That was basicly my only complaint. Great job and keep it up! 0(o.o)0

Nice work but I think it needs to be few lines longer to soak in the whole feeling of the meaning.

It souns really panicked and hurried trough the story. You need to lengthen it and add more details or it doesn't sound very poetic. Nice idea though. 0(o.o)0.

I love this! It's just beautiful how it flows and its rhythm is fantastic! It'd be a sin to not show this to your mom! No chatspeak, please. ~ Snoink.