Published November 22, 2007
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First of all--brava! This is a wonderful little play; skillfully written and obviously well thought out. One of the best I've ever read on the site. I laughed aloud at the end, I'll admit, and I combed it for suggestions, but could find nothing. Well done!
Yeah, monkeys! I guess monkeys can write some pretty good plays;D! I always make this mega-hott monkey at hte end of each comment so here it is; 0(o.o)0
I thouhgt this was funny, something that you wouldn't see normally. As in a good thing, very creative. I dont know what else to say.
Awesome!
I loved it!
It was funny--but I liked your other one better. Still, this was the second best script I read on here!
Except you had too much stage direction. It made me feel like you thought I was an idiot. Use it sparingly, only when you think the actor would not understand what to do when they're performing it.
Fantastic! Sensational! It'll run for years!
But seriously, it was good. There were a few places where the dialogue seemed unnatural, but hey, what other problems could there be?
Also, I read something like this before. Not exactly the same, you've probably never heard of it, but at least the title reminded me. It's Words, words, words by David Ives.
That was good. It was amusing, and enjoyable. I liked the references to "On The Waterfront" and "The Producers". Yeah, I know a lot of movies. Sorry. Anyways, the dialogue was sounded authentic, and it flowed very well. The idea was really funny, and the ending made me chuckle. It's a nice little play.
Keep writing. Congratulations.