Infinite Monkeys on Infinite Typewriters (Removed)

by smorgishborg

Published November 22, 2007

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Fand
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Fand wrote a review Review · Apr 12, 2008

First of all--brava! This is a wonderful little play; skillfully written and obviously well thought out. One of the best I've ever read on the site. I laughed aloud at the end, I'll admit, and I combed it for suggestions, but could find nothing. Well done!

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summergrl13
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summergrl13 commented Comment · Mar 8, 2008

Yeah, monkeys! I guess monkeys can write some pretty good plays;D! I always make this mega-hott monkey at hte end of each comment so here it is; 0(o.o)0

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MidnightVampire
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MidnightVampire commented Comment · Mar 4, 2008

I thouhgt this was funny, something that you wouldn't see normally. As in a good thing, very creative. I dont know what else to say.

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Gadi.
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Gadi. wrote a review Review · Dec 1, 2007

Awesome!

I loved it!

It was funny--but I liked your other one better. Still, this was the second best script I read on here!

Except you had too much stage direction. It made me feel like you thought I was an idiot. Use it sparingly, only when you think the actor would not understand what to do when they're performing it.

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Rigel
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Rigel wrote a review Review · Nov 28, 2007

Fantastic! Sensational! It'll run for years!

But seriously, it was good. There were a few places where the dialogue seemed unnatural, but hey, what other problems could there be?
Also, I read something like this before. Not exactly the same, you've probably never heard of it, but at least the title reminded me. It's Words, words, words by David Ives.

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Icaruss
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Icaruss wrote a review Review · Nov 22, 2007

That was good. It was amusing, and enjoyable. I liked the references to "On The Waterfront" and "The Producers". Yeah, I know a lot of movies. Sorry. Anyways, the dialogue was sounded authentic, and it flowed very well. The idea was really funny, and the ending made me chuckle. It's a nice little play.

Keep writing. Congratulations.



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