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Re: Hey...how was ur day?
Hey! I'm Summerdepressionexe, here with a quick review. Firstly, I love how you used an allusion to Romeo and Juliet to display your theme. It was very creative and worked ...
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Re: cardboard castles
Hey, this is Summerdepressionexe; I have a quick review for you. This piece is beautifully disjointed. It doesn't have much in the form of an overarching 'plot,' but it all ...
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Re: A Kid
Hello! This is Summerdepressionexe, here to leave a quick review: Firstly, I love how raw and messy the emotion feels in this poem. The piece feels very real and serves ...
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Re: ghost in the machine
Hi there figmoon! I have a quick review for you! (disregard how disorganized this is, just a few thoughts of mine as I read) "i started moving on before I ...
Mar 7, 2023 -
Re: You Think Me a Woman
This poem is absolutely incredible. I can feel the anger and pain behind each and every word, both becoming deeper as the poem progresses. This powerful piece would work very ...
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Re: Wetfire-chapter one
Hey, I have a quick review for you! (Just to preface, I've never read Wings of Fire and know barely anything about the books) I really liked this as a ...
Feb 18, 2023 -
Re: It was never truth that hurt
Hey! I have a quick review for you! I really liked and related to your poem. You painted a vivid picture of what was going on and how it made ...
Feb 17, 2023 -
Re: A Storm
I loved this poem and how you used imagery to your advantage. The work has a very nice flow all throughout and utilizes amazing vocabulary. The first stanza was an ...
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Re: Roles
Hello! I really loved your poem and how it used the allegory of baking to convey how we create our roles in society and how they can limit us later ...
Jan 12, 2023 -
Re: Behind the trees
Hello! I'm going to leave a quick review/comment. I really loved your style of writing and how the dialogue is written; it feels very natural. The bond between Samantha and ...
Jan 10, 2023
