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She is just a dream I see But she seems so real to me. A melancholy strain she sings, Reminding me of my sins. - What sins? Things I don't ...

Hi. I'm Kate. Apparently I'm late for school, but I'll do your piece a quick review. We'll go in detail later when I get back. My eyes are open wide, ...

MORE FILIPINO! OHYESPLZ! 8D I like, like, like, like, like, LOVE this! I'm so glad some people takes the effort in writing using our native language! Kababayan! Mabuhay ka! Dakila ...

Way cool. Random, but cool nonetheless. ((clicks like button)) Sigh. You don't know how long I've been wanting to do that, but I just couldn't find a good piece. And ...

Hi. I'm Kate. I'll be your critic for today. Why must you love me? - CLICHE! At the very beginning, to boot! :shock: Gosh. Why won't people stop doing that ...

Hi. I'm Kate. I'll be your critic for today. First off, the title. "Le Poem"? This isn't even French, mon ami . I understand it's in there for humour, but ...

Hi. Kate here. I'll be your reviewer for today. Lonely isn’t a person, Who can I blame? Lonely isn’t a thing, What can I blame? By golly, the poem meets ...

The big brown eyes - 'the' should be 'her'. they coo her naivety - 'coo'? I'm afraid I don't catch your gist. The small red lips - 'the' should be ...

I promise you a review. I'll review this as soon as I finish homework... or probably tomorrow... so please expect one from me nonetheless. But first... ((likes)) good job. You ...

D'AWWWWW~! What a nice piece this is! And it's short, making it convenient for me to review even though I'm busy with homework... YES, I'M BUSY WITH HOMEWORK. I'm dawdling ...

Hi. I'm Kate. Applaud, for you've got two reviewers by the name "KATE" all in one day! Be astounded, commoner! XD AHEM. Anyway. Off to the review. Ah... Thank you ...

Hi there! I'm Kate, and welcome to YWS! Seeing that you gave such a lengthy review on my work, "Sunny Side Up!" (which I've already edited, by the way), I'm ...

I have a poem with the same title, but of course, with a different gist. I'll post if I can. But let me take a break for today... but rest ...

Death of an Athiest: I lay on my soon-to-be death bed, - Edited. Better? Black roses be at my feet, - Sounds Shakespearean when you do it like this, no? ...

Hi. I'm Kate. Welcome to YWS. :D First of all, don't think I'll go easy on you just because you're new... :twisted: Just kidding! Now... First I want to spell ...