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Re: Horses
YES YES YES A poem about horses !! This made my day
May 10, 2021 -
Re: An Utterly Stupid, Nonsensical, and Ultimately Fruitless Exercise to Practice my Suspenseful Writing
Ohhh I can see the conflict coming This was AWESOME The tension was great, I have no idea what the writing exercise was, but this was just wonderful. I really ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: Smile
Hi there MissGangamash :D This is a very powerful message you've handled to the perfection. Message-wise, it was perfect. You talk about some issues that are given awareness, but that ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: School Drama
Yay a script :DD I was so excited to read this, scripts are so rare on this site unfortunately :( Anyways, on to the review ! I'm no specialist in ...
May 2, 2021 -
Re: Longing of a Maiden Rose: Ch.V: Path of a Country 1
OH. MY. GOD ahhh the art is so beautiful, the map looks like a gorgeous rainforest and the colours are just so gradient, so soft, so incredible !! You're so ...
May 2, 2021 -
Re: Legion: Chapter 1
Ooh I love this There was so much tension in this chapter, so much suspense- I can't wait to know more. This chapter was built so perfectly, with a balanced ...
May 2, 2021 -
Re: Sally
Hey there MC :) I decided to come drop a little comment on your more recent works since it seems we never seem to be able to meet in the ...
Apr 30, 2021 -
Re: The Fume Of Sighs
Holy sh- That's one hell of a way to start a chapter 0-0 The action was thrilling, the description was clear, never too cluttered and always flowed nicely, and the ...
Apr 29, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 4: Box
Oooh interesting I love where this is going, truly there is always action in every single one of your chapters, it's awesome ^^ The action was impeccable and gripping, the ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: Paracosmist
Hey there, your poem really made my day :D Each verse of yours is quotable, they're all so unique and yet fit so well together. The imagery is vivid and ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: The Final Kingdom
Hi there :) I saw this in the green room and am here to take it out of there :P more so since it's a really interesting story ! You ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: Written in the Stars (Prologue)
Hi there :) I believe this is the first story you've ever written, or at least posted on this site, and it's incredible ! It was short, just as a ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: Darkness Falls
Hi there :) For a weird reason, this reminds me of a movie I've recently watched. It's called Devil (by M.Night Shyamalan,) and it's got the same premise. People are ...
Apr 28, 2021 -
Re: The Murder of Misty Hollow
Hi there ! In such a short amount of time, you managed to give each character a distinct personality, and although we know nothing about either of them, the main ...
Apr 27, 2021 -
Re: Blueberry Bush
Hey there :) You are way too modest, that's one of the sweetest poems I've ever read ! I loved the flow of this poem, the sentences are short and ...
Apr 27, 2021