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  • Poetry » General, General Re: When you rise

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here for the Apple Dumpling Gang! Wow! This is excellent poetry! I didn't find anything that I didn't like about it! I loved the hope intertwined ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Disappointed Love

    Hello my friend!! Reviewer here for the Apple Dumpling Gang! This is a very good poem! It was intriguing and had rhythm! I enjoyed the subject because it's something a ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Last Summer

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here for Apple Dumpling Gang! Excellent poem! The rhyming and rhythm was superb! I have always enjoyed poetry, but a good poet is really an outstanding ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When I am alone

    Hello runawaylove! Here to review for the Apple Dumpling Gang! Overall, this poem was extravagant! It really touched my heart as I am dealing with the year loss of my ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Still Here

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here for the Apple Dumpling Gang! This poem was short and powerful! The only thing I found was that you put periods after incomplete sentences. Instead ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Just Wanted to Say

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here to review! ;) I really enjoyed this poem! It had nice rhythm! I really loved the subject. You're style of writing was awesome! In the ...

    Nov 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Wanderlust

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here! I really enjoyed this poem! I loved the description! It really made books come to life and really was perfect! Nice job! I didn't find ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Writer's Block

    Hey there my friend! I really loved this poem! I didn't see anything coherently wrong with it either! Well done! It was simple and cute and a great way to ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: First day.

    Hello my friend! Review here! :) Overall this poem was very well written and intriguing! The rhyming was perfect and the rhythm was nearly perfect! There could have been a ...

    Nov 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Won't You Dance With Me?

    Hello my friend!!! I loved this poem! No... I LOVED this poem! It's so romantic and sooo sweet! I absolutely love romance! Haha! I really enjoyed this outstanding piece of ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Blue Hearts, Red Shoes

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here! I really enjoyed this poem! :) Nice work! I think it may have lack a bit of rhythm, especially in the third stanza... Also, I ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Pup

    Hi Joe! I am here to review once again! Just as I said about your last poem, it's powerful! I love the subject! It's a beautiful poem! As with the ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Other » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Generation

    Hello my friend! Wow! This poem is beautiful! :) Thank you for the encouragement! I love the emphasis on a change even we can make! I didn't notice any grammatical ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hollow

    Hello my friend! This is so powerful! I didn't notice any grammatical errors! I noticed each phrase was short and precise, but I believe that this style made the subject ...

    Nov 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Growing Up

    Hello my friend! Reviewer here to review your work of art! ;) First of all, I really enjoyed the concepts of the poem! I loved the topic and your writing ...

    Nov 19, 2013


If it wasn't for poetry, I couldn't express myself.
— Rosendorn