stevie415017

I am really confused to say what this is, specifically. I guess I don't know much about poetry but I did enjoy it. You're telling a story in the only ...

Hey there. I did NaNoWriMo to except I did a novel (couldn't write poetry to save my life). I like this ideal and have felt it as well. The anger ...

Why is this chapter so short and in prolouges they really explain the hole story look at romeo and juliet. I know you are young and new to this site ...

Ok i do like this story it reminds me of my best friend that i can never have and every movie on the halmark channal. Who is I i mean ...

I really like the story line and i will not be reviewing grammer becuase if you have read my pice yuo know i suck at grammer. Ok lets begin, I ...

This is my review im letting you know what the reader is thinging in the story. To start off why is she swiming in her room? I would also like ...

You have many great ideas. I do wish that you would put more detail into this story. I what to know more about the charactors and the situation. Some details ...

I wish you would discribe the charactors more. I have noticed a few word choices that could be better. I still have very little knowloge about this "change". Also when ...

I really got chills. I love your writting. The words sucessfuly painted a picture in my mind.

I very much like the writting. Im a little lost, if this is the first chapter some more back ground information would be nice but i still like the writting. ...